FMP: Seb's Review

I've just shown Seb my first take of my film, and he thought it was really great. There are only two additional shots that I need now which can be done easily, even though he was very critical about the overall structure and how it played out. Structure and Sub-plots are problems that will need severe addressing in the future, and I will try to read "Making A Good Script Great" by Linda Seger (and possibly "Screenplay" by Syd Field; I have assurance from Seb that the former is a lot better). I'd better keep the WhatsApp group chat updated on these new shots...